Music Monday: In My Veins, Andrew Belle

This week I have been writing some rather sad moments, and a song that Youtube happened to recommend to me, really captured the feeling I wished to convey in my writing.  The song is outside my regular listening genres,  but then again, writing sad, angsty moments is pushing me outside my regular writing boundaries as well.  So, let me share both the song and a small snippet of what I was writing.

“In My Veins – Period Dramas.” YouTube. Video created and posted by PiepMiau04, November 7, 2011.

Excerpt from Through Every Storm:

“Oh, yes!” she shouted. “It matters now because you know of the children and because  your business would suffer!”

Her fists were clenched at her sides, and his stomach roiled at the look of disgust on her face. Desperation clawed at his heart.  He was failing. He had failed.  That which mattered most to him was about to push him out of her life, and he had no idea how to stop her.  He could hold her─force her to remain, but she would only be there in body.  He saw her turning from him and grabbed her arm. “Lydia, please.  It is not like that.”

She yanked her arm away.  “You are not really going to try to tell me that you care for me, are you, George?  For I can guarantee, I’ll not be falling for your pretty words again.  I’ll not be played the fool any longer.”  Tears flowed down her cheeks as she turned and ran from him.  She could not bear to hear him say he loved her when she knew it was not true.

Wickham wanted to run after her, to make her understand how much he had changed and how much she now meant to him, but he could not.  His feet were rooted to the ground, and he could not seem to draw a full breath.  He stood watching her, his heart aching a bit more with each step she took.

“Papa?” A small hand grasped his.

His knees buckled, and he sank to the ground.

“Papa?” Louisa grabbed his face and looked at him.

He saw the fear in her eyes and smiled at her.  “I am well.  I just need a rest.”

She scrunched up her face and looked at him carefully.  “You are not well.  Mama is not well.  And I am going to get help.” Before he could stop her, she had spun on her heels and was running.

“Louisa, come back.” He called as he pulled himself to his feet, and soon overtook  her.  He snatched her up, crushing her to him.  “Where are you going?”

“To get Aunt Kitty.  She can make Mama feel better, and if Mama feels better, then you will feel better.”  She thumped him on the chest.  “You should have told her you loved her.”  She thumped him again.  “You should have told her.  Why did you not tell her?”

“She would not have believed me,” he said softly as he stroked her hair.

“You still should have told her.”  Her little body trembled as she gulped air between sobs.

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Leenie Brown

Author of Austen-Inspired and Original Fiction

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