Thursday’s Three Hundred: With the Colonel’s Help, Part 3

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Previous parts: Part 1, Part 2

Chapter 2A

Elizabeth tossed her bonnet on the dressing table and flopped onto her bed.  She closed her eyes and drew a slow deep breath.  It did little, however, to quell her anger. Of all the horrible, rotten, high-handed, arrogant things!  That man had no respect or care for anyone but himself!

She flicked off her shoes, wiggled her way up to her pillow, and draped an arm across her eyes to keep out the afternoon sunlight that shone through the window.  A dull pain drummed a steady rhythm behind her temples.  She knew tears would relieve some of the pain, but tears would also create red eyes and a swollen nose, and neither would aid her in her hope to retire peacefully to her room this evening instead of making the journey to Rosings and having to endure both his presence and that of his aunts. Then, once locked safely away from prying eyes, she would allow herself to indulge in tears for her sister.

She took another deep breath, followed by a third, a fourth, and so on until the slow rhythm lulled her from her contemplation of Jane’s sorrow into a somewhat restful slumber.

“Elizabeth,” Charlotte called softly as she slowly opened the door to Elizabeth’s room.

Elizabeth lifted her head and propped herself on her elbows.

“Oh, Lizzy, you are not ill, are you?”  Charlotte latched the door quietly and scooted across the room towards her friend.  Elizabeth rarely rested during the day.

“It is only a headache.”  Elizabeth drew herself to a sitting position. She had not intended to fall asleep.  She rubbed her temple.  It was not hurting as it had been.  Drat! She had no desire to be in the same room as Mr. Darcy. Perhaps if she were to dwell on him for a moment, her headache would increase, and her guilt for claiming to have one would lessen.  “It is nothing serious.  I am certain I will be well by morning.”

Charlotte tipped her head and studied Elizabeth’s face.  Her friend rarely had any malady, including headaches.

“It was warm today, and I must have walked too far in such warmth.  A little rest and I will be well,” Elizabeth assured Charlotte.  “I fear, I will be very ill company this evening.  It would be best to leave me here and go on without me.”

Charlotte’s brows rose at her friend’s explanation.  The day had been warm, but not overly so, and Elizabeth had not been gone so long as to have out-walked her capabilities.  “You appeared well in the sitting room while the colonel visited? Are you certain it was the walk that fatigued you?”

“I do not know what else it could be,” Elizabeth hedged. Her stomach twisted at the need to prevaricate, but she really could not abide being in that man’s presence. Remaining at the parsonage was imperative and, therefore, so was her lie.

“It was pleasant to have Colonel Fitzwilliam call today.  I dare say I shall miss his company when he leaves.”

“He is pleasant,” Elizabeth agreed as she groaned inwardly.  Charlotte was smoothing the blanket on the bed and only peeking up at her.  Both were actions that spoke of her friend’s desire to discover the truth behind the pain in Elizabeth’s head.

“Did you walk together long before you arrived home?”

Elizabeth rolled her eyes at what she knew was the beginning of Charlotte’s interrogation.  “Not for too very long.”

“But it was long enough to have a pleasant conversation?”

Elizabeth sighed at the determined look in Charlotte’s eyes as they finally rose from examining the coverlet to Elizabeth’s face.  “I do not wish to speak of it.”

“Lizzy, my dear, you know that Mr. Collins will be expecting you to attend Lady Catherine.  I am more than willing to plead your illness with my husband, but I will not do so unless you tell me about your walk.”  Charlotte spoke sweetly, but her look was unwavering.

Elizabeth sighed.  She knew that there was nothing to be done.  If she hoped to avoid going to Rosings this evening, an explanation must be given.  “Very well.  I will tell you about my walk. It was pleasant and solitary until I came upon Colonel Fitzwilliam. He was, as he said when he arrived, taking his annual tour of the estate before he and Mr. Darcy leave tomorrow.  We walked and talked for some time. I cannot say exactly how long it was until we arrived here.  My headache was starting even as we sat in the sitting room, but it was not so bad as to alter my disposition.  However, it has continued to grow, and I am certain I will be very poor company for Lady Catherine.”

“And that is it?  You walked; you talked; and then you developed a headache?”

Elizabeth nodded.

“That is very strange,” muttered Charlotte. “You have never walked so far as to cause yourself to feel ill.”

“Perhaps it is the air in Kent.” Elizabeth grimaced.  It was a sorry excuse of a reason.

Charlotte chuckled softly. “Yes, fresh country air is so taxing, is it not?”  She placed a hand on top of one of Elizabeth’s.  “What did the Colonel say that upset you? Remember how well I know you, Elizabeth Bennet.  You do not get headaches unless you are overwrought.”

“Must I tell you?”

Charlotte smiled sadly and nodded. “I fear you must.  About what did you and the colonel speak  that has caused your distress.”

Elizabeth gave an exasperated sigh. “Mr. Darcy and Jane.”

Charlotte’s brows furrowed.  “I did not know Colonel Fitzwilliam knew Jane.”

“He does not, but Mr. Darcy does.”

This statement did nothing to lessen the confusion on Charlotte’s face.

“You know how despondent Jane has been since Mr. Bingley left Netherfield,” Elizabeth explained.

Charlotte’s brows rose in understanding.  “Did Mr. Darcy have something to do with Mr. Bingley leaving?”

Elizabeth nodded.  “Colonel Fitzwilliam was telling me how Mr. Darcy is loyal to his friends and always watching out for them.  He illustrated his point with a story of how Mr. Darcy saved his friend Mr. Bingley from an imprudent match.  It seems that there were issues with the lady’s family.”  Elizabeth blinked against the tears that wanted to fall.  “He worked to separate Jane and Mr. Bingley.  It is Mr. Darcy who is responsible for Jane’s grief these last months. And that is what is giving me this headache.”

Charlotte rubbed the top of Elizabeth’s hand.  “Oh, that is serious news, indeed, but I do not think I can hold Mr. Darcy entirely responsible.”

“Why ever not?” Elizabeth snatched her hand away from her friend and crossed her arms. “He separated them!”

“Did Mr. Darcy force Mr. Bingley to leave his estate? Has he kept him bound and unable to return?” Charlotte asked.


“Then, do be reasonable, Elizabeth.”

“He hurt her.” A tear slid down Elizabeth’s cheek.

“Yes, he did, but do you honestly believe that to be his intention?”  Charlotte placed a hand on Elizabeth’s knee.  “Mr. Darcy could not have separated them if Mr. Bingley placed greater confidence in his own judgments rather than the judgments of a friend.  And what of Mr. Bingley’s sisters?  Could they not have been party to this separation as well?”

Elizabeth pondered Charlotte’s questions for a moment. There was truth in what Charlotte was saying.  Mr. Bingley should not have bowed to the wishes of his friend, and Miss Bingley had proven herself a false friend once Jane had arrived in town.  It was quite likely that she and Mrs. Hurst had played some role in the separation.  “I will allow that you might be right.”


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11 thoughts on “Thursday’s Three Hundred: With the Colonel’s Help, Part 3”

  1. Might be right? Come on Elizabeth! It’s lucky she has Charlotte to make her see reason.
    Also lucky that this will at least make the Colonels job easier in trying to prove what a good man Darcy is.
    I can’t wait to see how he goes about it 😊

  2. Charlotte needs to be in Elizabeth’s head. She can correctly see things the way they need to be seen and not from Elizabeth’s POV only. Put the blame for leaving on Charles where it should be – square on his shoulders. Yes, Darcy and the silly sisters opened their mouths, but Charles allowed them to change his mind willingly without him giving much thought to his feelings for Jane. He and Jane had many discussions that he seem to ignore. Elizabeth needs to think!

    1. We don’t really know what Mr. Bingley and Jane might have talked about in their time together. And, as Charlotte is about to get to in her discussion, Jane needs to take some of the blame for not making her feelings more obvious. So, neither I nor Charlotte can hold Bingley completely responsible. He had to have been uncertain of her feelings in order for any persuasion to work. But as I said, we’re getting to that in the next section 🙂

  3. I totally agree with Charlotte, nobody forced Bingley to leave Netherfield. He didn’t have the will to think for himself and now both he (presumably) and Jane are miserable. Was Darcy being officious? You bet. Were Caroline and Louisa bitchy and manipulative? Needn’t even ask. Can Charlotte’s wisdom save the day? Elizabeth is certainly lucky to have her as a friend.
    There are still a number of rivers to cross, but Elizabeth will need to skip the fury and be more reasonable. If anyone can show her the way, Charlotte can.

    1. Bingley left to take care of something in town and had plans to return — although he was also going to be back in town for January (Caroline mentions seeing Georgiana in January) which I assume is for the season — he does have a sister to get rid of, I mean, see married 😉 My guess, and it is only that, a guess, since we aren’t given details about that time, he was already in town, his sisters and Darcy show up and perhaps say, well, the season is starting soon, no need to return and do you really want to be marked for marriage to a lady with that sort of mother when you have no clear indication she returns your feelings? The gossips had already begun speaking of Jane and Bingley marrying. It’s much easier to be persuaded to stay in town and not return than it would have been to be persuaded away from the area. I think both his sisters and Darcy knew that too. And, I don’t think his feelings for Jane ever died or faded. He is pretty quick to propose as soon as he returns and is welcomed by her. Why else would his sisters not tell him of Jane being in town — they had to know he would have gone to find out if she welcomed him. But again, that is speculation. 🙂 However, Elizabeth will be very reasonable after this discussion. So getting her and Darcy together should be easy — no, really, it will be — until…. 🙂

  4. I’m glad Charlotte was able to plant a seed of good sense and reason in Elizabeth’s head. Elizabeth’s early opinion of Darcy has tainted her feelings to the point that she is not able to see that Bingley was at fault for the way he left and Jane was also at fault for not showing her feelings. But neither of them did anything malicious as the Bingley sisters did. However, the main person Elizabeth blames for Jane’s heartbreak is Darcy — the person who was trying to save his friend from a marriage of unequal affection. Granted, Darcy is really not the best person to understand a woman’s feelings since (in canon) he thinks Elizabeth understands his own attraction to her. I really love the canon Hunsford moment since it opens both Elizabeth and Darcy to understanding just how wrong they both had been in their prior interactions. But… if you can make them undergo their transformation without months of agony and introspection, well, I’m all for it!

    1. Well, it should go from months of introspection to hours. 🙂 Elizabeth needed to have that seed planted to get her thoughts headed in a more workable direction. I, too, like that moment in canon when they are both forced to face their error in thinking about the other person. The letter, I think, was very helpful in Elizabeth’s gaining understanding, so I did leave that in this story. All the misunderstandings are going to get dealt with in a very timely manner. (The colonel is not one for beating around the bush — make a plan and attack is more his style.) Of course, that means there must be some other “interference” coming before a final HEA that will also require the colonel’s help. 😉

  5. I love Charlotte and her good sense. She knows how to stimulate Elizabeth’s rational thinking instead of allowing her to react emotionally. Charlotte and the colonel should have a chance of some success with our pig-headed future couple.

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