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Music Monday: Austen Girls, That Don’t Impress Me Much

I thought I would have a bit of fun with today’s post. 🙂 I know that Valentine’s Day is coming, and I did consider posting a sweet love song sort of montage video (there are several on my Music Meets Movies playlist). However, as I was scrolling through that list, I came upon this one.  May your Valentine far exceed these options. 🙂

Did you notice how the splicing of a few clips makes the story appear to be different from how it actually is in the film? I did. BUT I still enjoy the video — and that last shot of Henry Crawford and his expression as he walks away, I thought worked perfectly as an ending both for the video and song.

Just like last week, I do not have a story excerpt to share this week, but I do have a little peek into my writing process for those who might find such things interesting. 🙂

I have finished the bonus short story to go with Enticing Miss Darcy, and I have received notes back on Enticing Miss Darcy from my first reader. This means I will be sending it out to my second reader this week.

That means I will need to begin a new story this week, which also means I most likely will not have an excerpt ready to share by next Monday.  I always like to have a few thousand words of a story written before sharing.

So, how do those few thousand words and the rest of the story get written? Like this:

I tend to follow a process of writing that I like to call writing into the fog. (It’s my take on the info found in Writing into the Dark by Dean Wesley Smith.)  What this means for me is that planning before I begin is minimal — think word webs and sticky notes and a few bullet points at the most.

Where my planning happens is during writing. I fill in sheets of information as I go, and I have a story structure diagram hanging above my desk that reminds me to ask how the scene I am about to write fits into the plot.

To a planner sort of person, it might seem a bit scattered and even scary to write a story without an outline safety net. However, for me, an official sort of outline tends to tie me up in knots creatively.

It’s taken me a long while to accept that this is how I write best and embrace it. It’s not a ‘wrong’ way for me to write — it might be for someone else, but it is not for me.  This is where I got stuck — worrying that I was doing it wrong — until I read Dean Wesley Smith’s book in which he pretty closely described how I tend to write.

I did a series of seven posts on Instagram (#writingintothefog) about how I was writing Enticing Miss Darcy using this into the fog method.

In brief, my process looks like this:

  1. Brainstorm — Choosing the title first is major as that tends to be my focus. Then, I consider incidents that might happen along the way and any character defects/improvements I wish to include. This might be done by scrawling all over a page or plastering it with sticky notes, or it might simply be done in my mind.
  2. Set up the notes page document — this includes a chapters chart, a calendar, a section for characters and details, and a section to list relationship plot points. I also include an area for a working blurb, in case I have one. I don’t always.
  3. Begin writing — Jump right into the action. Step into a character’s head and settle in for at least the first scene. Remember to record things on the notes page.
  4. On the second day and all following days, I will re-read/edit what I wrote the day before writing a new scene. Remember to record things on that notes page. It’s super important to help keep things straight and see how the story is building.
  5. Anytime there is a need for a name or some info needs researching — pause and research before continuing. (And don’t forget to record things on the note page if necessary. 🙂 )
  6. Share — excerpts on Mondays and full chapters on Patreon.
  7. Freak out somewhere in the middle that I’m messing it all up, question everything, and torment my friends with my self-doubts. Take their advice to basically shut up and get on with it. (They always say it nicer than that. That’s how I reword it to myself. LOL)
  8. Hit that exciting moment when the ending starts to come into view and realize that it’s all actually coming together and might work out well. 🙂  (And often get struck by an idea for a sequel or even a series of sequels.)
  9. Write the conclusion.  Share excitedly that I am done! Bask in that glorious feeling for a brief moment before…
  10. Edit <– this includes a full re-read looking for errors and adding a few details that I didn’t already add when I re-read before beginning a new scene each night. Send it to my first reader and fix as needed. Send to my second reader and fix <– this fix includes another full re-read. Finally, prepare for publication.

That’s my process, and believe it or not, as crazy as that list looks, I LOVE doing it. I crave writing time.  I even feel lost when I don’t have something to edit before I start writing each night, and, about the time I start to see the end of my current project, I start getting fidgety about what I will write next.  I simply love to write.  And I can’t express to you how much I appreciate the fact that you guys read that writing whether here on my blog, over on Patreon, or in a book.

Thank you.

Have a wonderful week and Happy Valentine’s Day!

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Music Monday: Henry and Catherine’s Love Story

Since I don’t have a story excerpt for you today, I thought I would share a music video about a story — one of my favourite Austen novels — Northanger Abbey to be precise.

Hype. “Henry & Catherine’s Love Story.” YouTube, YouTube, 15 May 2011, youtu.be/wSO-UG2yQoA.

I have a couple of confessions.

First, I have never seen this film adaptation. I’ve seen a rather odd version from the 80s but not this one.

Second, though I love the novel, I have not, in fact, read it.  🙂 I’ve only ever listened to it. 🙂 I do enjoy audiobooks at times. The narrator did a spectacular job allowing me to hear the sarcasm of the tale as I cleaned and got groceries. (I probably looked a bit silly laughing as I chose grocery items off the shelves in the store, but Mr. Tilney does know how to make a girl giggle. 😉 )

One of those ^ things I will have to, at some point, rectify — watching this film version of the novel. I am satisfied to have “read” the novel on audiobook (more than once).

Moving on from my lack of movie watching, I do not have a great deal of writing news to share, but I do have a bit.  I have finished the first draft of Enticing Miss Darcy and have posted it all on Patreon, and I have only a couple chapters to reread before sending it off to my first reader. Therefore, it appears, at the moment, that the tentative publication date of March 6, 2018 — only one month from now — is on track.

HOWEVER, there is that short story which I hope to add to the end of the book as a little extra info about a couple of side characters. That story is only just begun, and I must decide before I sit down to write tonight if I am going to go with a standard Leenie form of story or if I will put a bit of a different twist on it.  That is perhaps a bit cryptic, but unless you are one of my patrons, that’s as clear as it is getting until the story is published. (No matter how much I wish to share, I am determined to keep this one under wraps.)

I think that is all my news for this week. I will not have an excerpt next week either since I am writing that “secret” story, so I will share another story sort of video. Until then…

Have a great week!

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Wordless Wednesday: Costume Parisien fashion plate No.945 from 1809

Costumes Parisiens, Journal des Dames et des Modes 1809 [Public Domain] via Wikimedia Commons

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Music Monday: The Only, High Valley

I had a different song in mind for today’s post until this one popped up on YouTube as a recommendation for me on Saturday morning. Well, I gave it a listen, and then hit repeat several times and added it to my “My Kinda Country” playlist on both YouTube and Spotify. 🙂 To say I like it is a bit of an understatement. LOL Added to the fact that I like the song (a lot) as a reason for posting it today, is the fact that it fits in tone and theme with what I have been writing this week.

You see, I typed the final word of the first draft of Enticing Miss Darcy on Friday night (or technically Saturday morning as it was after midnight)! And we all know how a romance ends, right? On a very happily ever after note, which I think this song has in spades. So, I shelved the other song to use another week, and instead, you get to listen to this one. 🙂

Frankly, between writing the ending of Enticing Miss Darcy (8000+words) and One Winter’s Eve releasing this past Thursday, not much else got done this week in my writing world. 😀 Of course, it’s not like that was a relaxed schedule of work! I sent out emails, posted about the book being available, created some graphics as well as another book excerpt video, kept an eye on how things were selling and watching for the print version to link with the ebook, and so on. It was busy. I even skipped writing more of Confounding Caroline this week because when I get to the certain point in a story, and I can see the end coming, I have to get it out in order to be able to relax. 🙂 And I just couldn’t fit adding to Confounding Caroline and concluding Enticing Miss Darcy in my available writing time.

Looking ahead to this coming week, I will be working on a short story that will be a bonus follow up sort of thing for a couple of original characters in Enticing Miss Darcy.  I will also begin my first pass edits on Enticing Miss Darcy so that by the end of this  week or the beginning of next week, I will be able to send it to my first reader and start the process of polishing for publication. The tentative publication date is March 6, 2018, with a short pre-order period before that.

Also this week, I will have to begin working on brainstorming what the next work in progress will be. I think it is going to be a Dash of Darcy story.

Since I am heading into a transition period between stories, there maybe be one or two Monday’s without a story excerpt as I want to keep this bonus short story to Enticing Miss Darcy secret, and I want to have the next work in progress well underway before I share from it. (I like to make certain I am happy with how a story is unfolding before I start sharing.) And honestly, I need a breather, which means I am going to not push too hard to get things written and planned this week. (or at least I am going to try not to push too hard LOL)

So, for the final time on a Music Monday, here is…

AN EXCERPT FROM Enticing Miss Darcy

[Remember, this is toward the end, so it could very likely contain spoilers. Read at your own risk.] Continue reading Music Monday: The Only, High Valley